Journal of a damaged soldier

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    N'tensified

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    Falling to the ground slowly,
    reaching for myself's life again.
    Reaching to the inside coldly,
    I'd see my self rise up and then.

    [.Bridge.]
    I'd look to see If I was there,
    when I knew I couldn't hide.
    I'd see the clock ticking,
    counting down the time.

    [.Chorus.]
    I'd see the pain through agony,
    not so very far.
    I'd keep all my memories,
    all about this war.
    When I knew you wouldn't be there,
    I would have no shoulder.
    When I remembered all these memories,
    About being a soldier.

    When I grasp my weapon coldy,
    All I think about is to defend.
    I can see my fate unfolding.
    My destiny would crash and then.

    [.Bridge.]
    I'd look to see If I was there,
    when I knew I couldn't hide.
    I'd see the clock ticking,
    counting down the time.

    [.Chorus.]
    I'd see the pain through agony,
    not so very far.
    I'd keep all my memories,
    all about this war.
    When I knew you wouldn't be there,
    I would have no shoulder.
    When I remembered all these memories,
    About being a soldier.

    That's it, your done.
    I'm through with you.
    I cannot lie,
    about my find.
    I'm getting slower,
    Heart feels colder.
    I've lost my shoulder,
    I'M JUST A SOLDIER.
    I'm getting slower,
    Heart feels colder.
    I've lost my shoulder,
    I'M JUST A SOLDIER.

    [And then....]

    [.Bridge.]
    I'd look to see If I was there,
    when I knew I couldn't hide.
    I'd see the clock ticking,
    counting down the time.

    [.Chorus.]
    I'd see the pain through agony,
    not so very far.
    I'd keep all my memories,
    all about this war.
    When I knew you wouldn't be there,
    I would have no shoulder.
    When I remembered all these memories,
    About being a soldier.
    [No.]
    I'd see the pain through agony,
    not so very far.
    I'd keep all my memories,
    all about this war.
    When I knew you wouldn't be there,
    I would have no shoulder.
    When I remembered all these memories,
    About being a soldier.
    [No.]
     
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    N'tensified

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    Please someone post a comment, concern, or suggestion. :(
     
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    Cal

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    i would love to see u do something with that song

    put music onto it ;)
     
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    N'tensified

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    Thanks. I'll try.
     
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    Hybrid Soldier

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    That's it, your done.
    I'm through with you.
    I cannot lie,
    about my find.
    I'm getting slower,
    Heart feels colder.
    I've lost my shoulder,
    I'M JUST A SOLDIER.
    I'm getting slower,
    Heart feels colder.
    I've lost my shoulder,
    I'M JUST A SOLDIER.



    sorry but for some reason i dont like this part.
     
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    Shinji

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    i like the whole song
     
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    Cal

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    That's it, im done
    I'm through with you.
    I cannot lie,
    about my find.
    I'm getting slower,
    my heart feels colder.
    trailing by my shoulder,
    I'M JUST A SOLDIER.
    I'm getting slower,
    my Heart feels colder.
    trailing by my shoulder,
    I'M JUST A SOLDIER.

    i thought i would be ur producer ^_^
     
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    N'tensified

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    That's it, im done
    I'm through with you.
    I cannot lie,
    about my find.
    I'm getting slower,
    my heart feels colder.
    trailing by my shoulder,
    I'M JUST A SOLDIER.
    I'm getting slower,
    my Heart feels colder.
    trailing by my shoulder,
    I'M JUST A SOLDIER.

    i thought i would be ur producer ^_^ [/b][/quote]
    Two different opinions at once. I would agree with both sides I guess, I'm just Seeing your opinions. Oh well, thanks for replying....again. :chemist:
     
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    meteorxero

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    What is this about a journal or what? :joe:
     
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    Hybrid Soldier

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    That's it, im done
    I'm through with you.
    I cannot lie,
    about my find.
    I'm getting slower,
    my heart feels colder.
    trailing by my shoulder,
    I'M JUST A SOLDIER.
    I'm getting slower,
    my Heart feels colder.
    trailing by my shoulder,
    I'M JUST A SOLDIER.

    i thought i would be ur producer ^_^ [/b][/quote]
    wow that sounds much better.
     
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    meteorxero

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    Yo N'tensefied why not making a song against me you scared. People Please look at my new song "Questions to ask N'tensefied?" and u see wat i mean :joe:
     
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    arT saveS

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    I see forced rhyming..
    But not bad at all. :D
     
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    arT saveS

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    Oh, and "yo", I think you need to lay of N`tensified..
    And to answer your question for him..
    He's mature..
     
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    N'tensified

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    Someone stood up for me.... :( I am so very happy! :) ..... :chemist:
     
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    meteorxero

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    F*ck yalls i feel like killin yalls cuz yall got no IDEA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
     
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    N'tensified

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    Shut up you Rapper-wannabe. :angry:
     
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    arT saveS

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    ^_^ :p
     

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