Inside My Mind

Inside My Mind

I can’t take this pain I find,
Gnawing away inside my mind,
My head’s tearing itself in two,
Because of the memories about you,
At first you made me feel so tall,
But then you let me fall,
Back down onto my face,
As a disgrace.

You keep hanging stuff over my head,
And then bring it back just as I dread,
It killed my hope years ago,
But for some reason it’s hard to say ‘no’,
If you knew the pain I was going through,
Would you still do the things you do?
The stars look so goddamn ugly,
This ain’t the way it should be.

Chorus:
Will I ever wake up from this nightmare?
Someday I’m gonna kill her,
I need to release all this stress and tension,
Send me off to another dimension,
With my f*cked up head and messed up dreams,
I have no idea what this all means.

I fear someday I’ll break out of my shell,
And I’ll remember how far I fell,
These scars will never heal,
They show the pain and misery that I feel,
Crawling over broken glass,
Questions that I should have asked,
Haunt the insides of my brain,
Slowly driving me insane.

Chorus

Bridge:
Turning over in my mind,
I have suddenly come to find,
Even though I don’t want you to stay,
I don’t want you to leave it this way,
And that if you do leave,
That I will miss you.

I need to keep control of myself,
Need to keep hold for my own health,
Hold on to the last of my breath,
Holding on until my death,
Closer and closer it breathes down my neck,
My hope start to sink like a ship wreck,
I want to get back on top,
But the only way to do that is to stop.

Chorus

Bridge

Now I’m going after girls that I think are mature,
But I don’t go far as you’ve hit me to the floor,
I keep on trying to get back onto my feet,
I’m sure that I won’t give in to defeat,
Although I know deep down inside that I’ve lost,
It covers up the hope like winter frost,
Still feeling down and lonely,
I feel like you don’t know me.

Chorus


Thanks to DefMan for help with the title

Tell me what you think, please.........

 

Like i said when you first wrote it and showed me it, Very good, keep it up

 

Thanks, man. I added a bit onto it before.



Right now I'm trying to write a new song but all I got is one line

 

thats awesome. keep tha good work.

 

Man, we have so many ######'' good writers here on LPA......oh, yeah, great job!

 

Excellent work!

 

Thanks for the replys

 

and I'm not one of them