Whoa, Will. Thats great. I know exactly how you feel. Eh, can't say it gets better through time, it hasn't for me. But, good luck with that. Anyways, great job.
Your writing rules. If you keep that up, I'm sure you'll have a promising future. Excellent job, Will. I always enjoy reading your work.
Whoa...that was really, really...excellent. Jesus..I haven't read "Eulogy For An Angel" yet, but if its even half as good as that one it will be one of the best I have ever seen. It's like some people write about #### like this, and say they went through it, even though they didn't...or whatever, but yours seems like its really from the heart. Great job man, great job.