.:Inevitable:. Failure becomes hard to pass What you have now Will never last The odds are stacked Up as high as a wave upon the mightiest sea Your goals are strung Up upon the branches of the greatest tree Your not expected to win Their words Are tearing you limb by limb The road you take Leads onto nothing but mistakes All the failures All the mishaps Will become inevitable Pain will surface Where you would never expect Right beneath (right beneath) Your own nose Build up your walls high Protect yourself from All of those who lie Hold tight what you have now Never let anyone inside of the heart of you The risks are too great Nothing but letdowns will ensue Your not expected to win Their words Are tearing you limb by limb The road you take Leads onto nothing but mistakes All the failures All the mishaps Will become inevitable Pain will surface Where you would never expect Right beneath (right beneath) Your own nose Your just not ever expected to win All of their deceitful words Are tearing your insides limb by limb The road you take Leads onto nothing but mistakes All the failures All the mishaps Will still always be inevitable
I have to agree with Defman. Your refrain is needs some work but everything else is good. (7 half/10)