In The Moment Before Everything Slips Away

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    The Emptiness Machine

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    This song, it needs an explanation for you to really understand it I think but I also think most people will get the general feel to what its about so I'll leave an explantion of at first and let people come up with their own theorys. It's a little long so be prepared.

    In The Moment Before Everything Slips Away
    It was so simple, I never even saw it comming.
    After it happened, I then thought of running but it was too late
    Fell off of the cliff and then busted my head
    Brains spilled out and then I was dead

    But in that fateful moment
    When my eyes closed and my heart stoped it's beating
    When my breath exhaled it's very last
    I saw my life flash before me in the shape of memories

    I saw each lie I ever told
    I saw the first kiss I ever had
    I heard myself say I love you to my dad

    I heard him say he loved me too
    I saw every book I ever read
    I saw each arguement that ecaped my lips
    In that momemnt before I sliped into the eternal

    I felt more scared than I ever had
    The chill of death crawling up my spine
    And creeping into my eyes

    I felt a presece that I was sure was God
    Then it vanished and I saw each song I ever heard
    In waves of clouds that held no solid form

    I never saw the color black
    Until I saw the blackness after my final breath
    And I heard the ticking clocks
    Manesfisting into the unknown afterlife

    I felt someone grasp my hand
    They were warm and I thought it was heaven
    I felt the wind on my knees
    As I looked up and said "God forgive me please"

    "Please" Forgive me for all the wrong things I've done
    For not believing when I knew I should have
    For turning my back

    And then he was gone
    And lions scrathed at my soul
    As I scream and shrieked for it to let go
    It seemed like it was forever until it did
    And when I looked at the lions there were none

    Someone I regained thought
    And thought maybe there is no after, after all
    Maybe just a blink and then the lights flicker and fades
    Just a mement before everything slips away

    Still I held on and on to rationality
    There has to be something here for me
    Blackness is misery, but the blackness was better than what was soon to come
    Not even darkness was worse than nothing at all

    After all the memories are carried away
    After I saw my mom lose her faith
    And after every single breath I did ever take
    I thought maybe, just maybe there is nothing

    Nothing no light
    No dark
    No breath
    No sound
    Just nothing

    It was so simple, I never even saw it comming.
    After it happened, I then thought of running but it was too late
    Fell off of the cliff and then busted my head
    Brains spilled out and then I was dead

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    Okay I personally think I could have done a lot better than this. I am going to write something similar if not entirely differnt but with the same concept. My mistakes are that I didn't let this build up if I had, I believe I could make a master peice.​
     

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