Immortal Touch

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    Dragondust

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    Immortal Touch

    Loves skin
    paper-thin
    like porcelain
    deep rising eyes
    draped in a sadness

    An immortal touch
    a caress through
    a dream
    insisting upon
    my love

    Drawing in near
    conceived of dust
    illusions of
    the unreal
    a blur in
    the vacant night

    A ghost
    of what once was
    haunted
    by you​
     
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    my_december

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    Nice, kind of Gothic-y.... I think :p Keep it up :D
     
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    Dragondust

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    thanks...I really appreciate the comment and for taking the time to read it!
     
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    faint 13

    faint 13 You, try to take the best of me, GO AWAY

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    realy good
     
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    Theazninvasion68

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    I enjoy the seperation of the two. I think the first half is the skin of love. It's thin, veiled and pulling. It's a touch that goes through your body and dreams. And love is a two way street.

    The second half is what of love. The thinness and emptiness of the absence. It's a stark reminder of your ownself, but no longer is you.

    Well written. :)
     

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