Imagination

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    RiffRockerX

    RiffRockerX Member

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    Here is my newest poem. I really like this one. The theme is about the imagination of a young child, how wonderous it can be. Here goes:

    I traced your shadow in the sand
    You came alive with me
    Like the rain that falls so gently
    You danced upon the sea
    Like a flickering flame you crept
    Upon the swaying tide
    In and out like indecision
    Nothing for you to hide
    As darkness made it's presence known
    You retreated from whence you came
    Settled beneath the pearly sand
    For another hand to tame
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    Short but it's good.
     
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    ChooseYourPoison

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    Hm, didn't know you wrote poetry, Kody. Its great! :D
     

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