I'm Not Quite Sure How I Should Say This

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    Will

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    Let the walls come crumbling down
    They don't deserve to stand around me
    You weren't there to lend a hand
    Now I'm on my own and that's all I know
    Let the night rain down upon us
    Drop the knife onto the kitchen floor
    Save your dramatics for someone who cares
    I know you'd never go through with it anyway

    So lay down and scream my name
    You'll never understand the problem
    You're here 'cause you've got no shame
    And now I'll meet you at the bottom

    So here we are again beneath the old oak tree
    Your breath is frosty in this cold December air
    I remember the day that I made my promise
    Shattered within months but not my fault
    Broken into pieces but not my fault

    So slit my throat
    Watch me die
    Bury me
    I'll never succumb to you

    You're unstable and you won't admit it
    You're out for blood and you'll regret it
    These wounds you've created
    They're your own
    But it seems you'll never learn that

    So lay down and scream my name
    You'll never understand the problem
    You're here 'cause you've got no shame
    And now I'll meet you at the bottom
     
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    Linja

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    It's been a long time since you've posted anything here, Will, and I've got to say, this is gorgeous.
     
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    Will

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    Thanks for the comment. :)
     
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    Darcy

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    I really, really enjoyed this. Very good.

    The only line that I didn't particularly like is the, "slit my throat" line but that's just me. It fits in the song anyway.

    My favorite line was, "Save your dramatics for someone who cares"

    But yes, you should post here more often. I love reading your work.
     
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    That was great! I really liked it how that "So lay ..." part came back.
     
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    Thanks for the comments. :)
     

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