I'm just Gonna Go

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    Dedicated

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    Note: The parts in italics are spoken.

    "I'm Just Gonna Go"

    I'm off the back of a weekend I'd pay to forget,
    But I can't really remember any of it,
    I told you that I loved you,
    You said that you love me too,
    I said "I said 'I loved you,'
    Not 'love' as in still do...
    Amd even if you love me,
    You've taken it too far,
    You could of had me back then,
    You know, way back in March."

    "You've known how I've felt since, like, the start of the year... I'm not gonna be second best anymore."

    You know I've wanted you,
    For far too damn long,
    So many lines I've fed you,
    They could make a love song.

    "I'm not gonna wait for you forever. So if you don't want this, I'll go..."


    I'm off the back of a weekend I'd pay to forget,
    But I can't really remember any of it,
    I told you that I loved you,
    You said that you love me too,
    I said "I said 'I loved you,'
    Not 'love' as in still do...

    "You've known how I've felt since, like, the start of the year... I'm not gonna be second best anymore. I'm not gonna wait for you forever. So if you don't want this, I'll go..."

    I'm just gonna go...
    I'm just gonna go...
    I'm just gonna go...
    I'm just gonna go...
     
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    Luke

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    I love it man,keep that creative mind of yours rolling :)
     
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    Glue

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    it was great keep it up...write more ^_^
     
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    Well done.
     
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    *CLAPS*

    Great work
    I like the way it is set out with the italics bits in quotation marks.
    It just helps u feel it. It is a great poem. Nice work.
     
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    Dedicated

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    Thanks alot for the comments :)
     

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