I'll Still Stay

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    The Emptiness Machine

    The Emptiness Machine Out of the abyss. LPA Über VIP

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    A song. Not too complicated, I hope. C&C really appriciated. :D



    I'll Still Stay
    (Friends)

    Hey let's talk some more
    right here in the dark
    a separation many miles away
    just to hear your voice one last time
    would brighten up my days

    Can't you see, that my heart
    has given up, ran away from me?
    It's with you don't you know?
    Perched upon an invisible scarlet glow

    Can I make you laugh?
    Could you watch me die
    and breathe new life
    like so many times before
    please let me in, I won't go
    cause I wanna stay
    in your heart and never go

    Though you hurt me then,
    the scars should have healed,
    so long ago and you read the stars,
    a consolation of my wounds
    see the pain?
    I'd forgive you
    but I hold no blame

    I know what I am, you don't have to say
    I know the way out but I still wanna stay

    I'd come to you and say let's walk
    in the dark underneath the trees
    and we could talk about all things
    as I watch your curly hair dance with the breeze

    And if you say no
    I'll still wait
    And if you wanna go
    I'll still wait
    right here 'til the end of days

     
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    Theazninvasion68

    Theazninvasion68 It's like blood to a vampire, our tragic desire. LPA Super VIP

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    Its a sweet song! I like the narrative and the small placed importance on a few colorful things. The only thing missing imo is a chrous.

    The ending was kinda my favorite, its a sweet line.

    And when I mean sweet I mean cute :lol:
     

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