If You Ask

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by my_december, Apr 20, 2011.

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    my_december

    my_december Well-Known Member

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    If You Ask

    Well if you ask then you
    couldn't tell
    I'd guess you'd say I'm doing
    well
    Alone
    On my own
    And if you ever took the time
    Then I guess you'd see that I'm
    alright
    Doin' fine
    All alone

    And if you ask then I'm doin'
    fine
    Don't be surprised if I'm gone
    Farther down the line
    Just up and gone

    And if you'd asked me once
    before
    I might've told a different story, sure
    But times are strange
    It's easy to say that it's OK
    But not as easy when you're in
    the rain
    Lost in the rain

    And somewhere down that fabled
    line
    You may see where you got left
    behind
    So far behind
    Memory in black and white
    Can't replace a face or a smile
     
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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    Decent. Nothing especially struck. Or maybe it didn't strike a chord with me, specifically. Although, the structure of the verses are fresh. So I gotta give you credit for trying that out.
     

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