I Need

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    Taylor Hewitt

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    Taylor Hewitt, Sep 13, 2003



    I Need
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    I do not have
    What I need
    I need to love
    I need to bleed

    I need someone
    To call my own
    I need a place
    To call my home

    All I have
    Is an empty soul
    I need you
    To fill this hole

    Please give me
    What I need
    ---
    By: Taylor Hewitt
     
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    Taylor Hewitt

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    Taylor Hewitt, Sep 13, 2003



    Well?
     
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    Andrea

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    Andrea, Sep 13, 2003



    Awesome. Great job. :)
     
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    Terry

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    Terry, Sep 13, 2003



    I thought it could've been better. :wth:
     
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    Metamorphosiss

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    Metamorphosiss, Sep 13, 2003



    Yeah, its Awesome.
     
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    Taylor Hewitt

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    Taylor Hewitt, Sep 13, 2003



    Yeah thanks.
     
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    _PianoPaPercut_, Sep 14, 2003



    good work.. short but good..^_^
     
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    Taylor Hewitt

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    Taylor Hewitt, Sep 17, 2003



    Yeah it's a bit of an improvement from some of my older poems.
     

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