I met myself the other day

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    Seinfeld

    Seinfeld We are the nobodies LPA Super Member

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    This is for a contest at Deviantart...we're supposed to write based on a specific theme.

    The theme was:

    'yourself'

    Write a poem about yourself. I think I did well at describing myself in most of the lines, while still leaving it open for interpretation...At least I hope

    thoughts please.

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    I met myself the other day...:

    I know so many individuals,
    yet I know not a single one of myself

    The skin I carry is not only a fascade
    but an empty canvas / More than just a protective shell

    I shift shapes of my own and replace them with those of others:
    One day, my interior will be filled with dirt
    The next day I will paint my walls in the brightest shades of optimism,
    covering yesterday's hurt

    I say I could care less about your opinon
    But inside, I scream at you for saying the same
    If I could, I'd take the easy way out,
    while bathing in the greatest attention and fame

    I will never praise myself,
    for I'd like praise to be heard from lips other than mine
    I'll swallow the harshest words of criticism, feel my insides churn
    but still sport a smile, acting like I'm fine

    Melancholy is the only one to keep me company more often than not
    But I won't take depression's exit, I don't want to stop

    I know so many individuals,
    yet I know not a single one of myself

    I try to portray with words, what I believe I portray with flesh
    ...
    Just another controversial fragment of my inner self



    Life is like a vocabulary.
    Our poems would suck without it.
     
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    Jordan

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    I really liked that piece, hope you win the contest!
     
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    Radish

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    This is fantastic! Good stuff mate! :)
     
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    Seinfeld

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    Thank you both very much ^_^
     
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    Gitsnik

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    That's very good.
     
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    El Muerto

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    Strong piece. I hope you win the contest. :)
     
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    Seinfeld

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    Thank you very much ^_^
     

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