If I'd said those words Would you have stayed? If I'd begged in a million ways Would you still be here? It was too late By the time I'd found out You left too soon Without a doubt You left me here Alone, no friends Without you here There is no end To the damage you've done To my broken aching I miss you, and some But I kept on taking I love you But it's too late I love you I've met my fate Stare it in the eye Death smiles and beckons I take my first step to die I have learnt my lesson Why didn't I beg? Sat on the floor and cried Took me down another peg Death saw me begging to die Raise the silver to my wrist One last moment for regrets Death's caught me in his iron grip I'm not completely forgotten yet I love you But it's too late I love you I've met my fate Talk to me, my love Why do you so ready to cry? Life has always been tough Why the teardrops in your eye? If I'd walked you to the door Maybe you'd have hesitated If I'd tried to give you more Maybe you would have stayed If I'd said those words Would you have stayed? Of I'd begged in a million ways Would we still be here? I love you.
Nice stuff, your best one yet, you are getting better all the time, this one was really powerful and i really liked it. Keep up the great work.
Great work...sounds a lot like something I would write. Maybe we should try and write something together sometime, seems we've got a bit of a similar style. I have some olderrrr junk on here if you want to check it out. Keep writing. <3