I know I Can but I Won't

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    The Emptiness Machine

    The Emptiness Machine Out of the abyss. LPA Über VIP

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    I Know I Can but I Won't

    We fall in love and take the dive
    Then our hearts break and we want to die
    It doesn't matter if the sun still shines
    Or how many smiles we've had in our life time
    We just say everything is useless
    That this painful hell is stupid
    We cut ourselves and curse the world
    Driving our minds into circles
    Becoming lunatics without any sense
    And if you try to tell us
    We'll just ignore you
    And every word you say
    Because deep inside
    Behind secret walls there hides
    A heart made of black
    And the light it lacks
    won’t ever be restored

    So you, stop telling me...
    Stop telling,
    I know what I feel is real
    All my pain I know I feel
    So stop telling me
    That it's not worth it in the end
    Stop telling me
    That this pain is just pretend
    Even though I've lost I know I'm not defeated

    I sit at home looking at the screen
    The pain it comes and never goes it seems
    But I'm tired of all the lies I tell myself
    That this place is just one miserable rotting hell
    It's like my wounds are reopening
    And ever word I have has lost all of what it means
    If I could smile just one more time
    It would outweigh all the scars and I'll leave them behind
    And deep inside I tell myself these lies that death is better
    That eternal darkness is like a glove
    I'll put it on and fit it will
    Perfect like a sweater
    Yet carry on I can't, I've made myself believe in this disease
    I can no longer hold on, even though I know I can
    Grow up to be an awesome man, but carry on I can't
    I told myself too many times... So here I am singing away my lies
    And I know I can survive but won’t. Just like you could stop telling me when you don’t

    So you, stop telling me...
    Stop telling,
    I know what I feel is real
    All my pain I know I feel
    So stop telling me
    That it's not worth it in the end
    Stop telling me
    That this pain is just pretend

    Even though I've lost I know I'm not defeated
    I know I’m not defeated; I’m just broken without words
    And if you care I’ll think you’ve cheated.

    So leave me the hell alone
    And stop telling me.

    Because nehind secret walls there hides
    A heart made of black
    And the light it lacks
    won’t never ever be restored!!


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    Seinfeld

    Seinfeld We are the nobodies LPA Super Member

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    "won’t never ever be restored!!"

    That didn't seem too...smart.

    And the verses seemed a little awkward to me.

    I like this part:

    "So you, stop telling me...
    Stop telling,
    I know what I feel is real
    All my pain I know I feel
    So stop telling me
    That it's not worth it in the end
    Stop telling me
    That this pain is just pretend"

    But other than that, I don't really feel this at all...sorry...but that's my opinion
     
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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    it was beautiful because it was sincere.
     

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