Mali is torn rose, and torn rose is Mali. Just reaffirming that. Seems I lost my touch when I changed my name. --- I hate you This time I mean it Leave me alone This time I mean it In the past I have said That I’m tired of hearing those same stupid words It didn’t mean a thing My aim is not to hurt But it was a mistake I never meant to get so drunk I didn’t mean to leap before I looked And now I’ve gone and messed it up I’ve tried to deny it with honey-soaked lies I’ve used every excuse in the book I try hard to rhyme I know in some way That you’re not going to leave The anger still manifests The sadness still grieves I was only trying to get along But you succeeded in bringing out the devil in me Now he won’t even look me in the eye Oh please, please let me be I hate you This time I mean it I hate you Maybe this time I’ll believe it Yes, I’m inexplicably attracted to you As you are to me You don’t deny its truth But what would you do If you were in a situation like me But wait, you are And you’ve chosen me How I envy you so Your eloquence Your passion Your ability to know just what you want In such a decisive fashion And I can see That you’re not the cheating type That if we hadn’t both been there You would have been with her for life But now that I see them together I think that you should be relieved After all, if she’s so prone to infidelity One of you were bound to leave I would never cheat on you There I go again Comparing myself to her Why do I torture myself so I love him But I’m not so sure I know that you With your sweet kisses Could easily persuade me to choose you But you’re careful, oh so careful You want to know I mean it too I love you This time I mean it Not an intoxicated exclamation I love you --- Comment and you get jellybeans!
I love it, because it's great. What did you say you lost? I'd rather have every flavor beans instead.
It isn't bad. It is hard to say. In terms of pure wrting, it wasn't amazing. However, I really liked the emotion in it. Some lines I loved too. Good job.
very smooth.... like the watermelon flavoured jelly beans that i get. what are we suppose to do with them anyway? ... .... *molests jelly beans*
Thank you all so much. You are supposed to eat the jellybeans, not have sexual relations with them. Hint hint, Arhaz