I don't care anymore(feedback please)

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    Red Union

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    Don't Care Anymore
    Verse one: (Won't listen/ didn't listen/ hiding in the dark/) Light/ hits me/ I am beginning to see/ (that life is not the same as I want it to be)/ I live in a world of illusions/ always searching for a solution/ ( to cure my sickness)/ so maybe you should shut up and let me figure it out/

    Chorus: I have grown so tired of what you say to me/ I don't care anymore/ this life is nothing but my chore/ not yours/ so stop telling me what to think/ I don't care anymore/

    Verse two: I see you/ walking with your smiling face/ going to your nice big place/ I'm going to take revenge/ (but maybe you shouldn't)/ no/ maybe I'm wrong/ maybe I shouldn't show you my vengeance/

    Verse Three: Breaking/ Inside/ I don't feel fine/ is it a disease/ I begin to see/ (that life)/ is a illusion/ there are no solutions/ so maybe you should shut up/ and let me figure it out/
    (Repeat Chorus)

    Verse Four: I shouldn't have listen/ to that little voice in my head/ it keeps yammering on like some great big piston/ (why won't you listen)/ telling me/ all the things I shouldn't do/ (you should stop singing)/ you know what/ JUST SHUT UPPPP
    (Repeat Chorus)

    So shut up/ grow so tired/
    So shut up/ I don't care anymore/
    So shut up/ this life is my chore/
    So shut up/ not yours/
    So shut up/stop telling me what to think/
    So shut up/ I don't care anymore​
     
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    obb

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    one step closer huh??

    anyways nice lyrics man . good job
     
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    Red Union

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    thank and yeah I worried about it sounding close to One Step Closer but without I think the song loses some of its flow.
     
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    Arhaz

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    nice nice job.
     

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