I took the time just now to re-write the song "I Could Not Ask For More" by Edwin McCain and Sara Evans. I do not claim copyrights or any of that legal stuff on the original song, nor do I claim them on this. But I ask that you see this re-write as my work and that you do not steal it. I re-wrote it for my crush... so... you know... And in order to know how this song "flows" you must know how the original songs go. I COULD NOT ASK FOR MORE ~ Re-written by W. Maltby [verse] Walking here with you Singing in the rain Laughing just to see A smile on your face Looking in your eyes Seeing my true love Glancing through the clouds To the heavens up above [pre-chorus 1] These are the moments I thank God that I'm alive And these are the moments I remember all my life I've found all I've waited for And I could not ask for more [chorus] I could not ask for more than this time together Could not ask for more than this time with you Every prayer has been answered Every dream I've had's come true Right here in this moment Is right where I'm meant to be Here with you here with me [verse] Laying here with you Listening to the rain Smiling just to see I'm erasing all your pain Looking in your heart Seeing all I need Everything you are Is everything to me [pre-chorus 2] These are the moments I know heaven must exist And these are the moments I know all I need is this I've got all I've waited for And I could not ask for more [chorus] I could not ask for more than this time together Could not ask for more than this time with you Every prayer has been answered Every dream I've had's come true Right here in this moment Is right where I'm meant to be Here with you here with me [bridge] Laying here with you Listening to the rain Smiling just to see The smile on your face Looking in your eyes Seeing all I need Everything you are Is everything to me [pre-chorus 3] These are the moments I know heaven must exist And these are the moments I know all I need is this I've got all I've waited for And I could not ask for more These are the moments I thank God that I'm alive And these are the moments I remember all my life I've got all I've waited for And I could not ask for more [chorus] I could not ask for more than this time together Could not ask for more than this time with you Every prayer has been answered Every dream I've had's come true Right here in this moment Is right where I'm meant to be Here with you here with me [outro chorus] I could not ask for more than the love you give me I could not ask for more than this life with you Every prayer has been answered Every dream I've had's come true Right here in this moment Is right where I'm meant to be Here with you here with me I could not ask for more No, I could not ask for more I could not ask for more
That's really good, but I haven't heard the original song before, so I don't really know what else to say.