This song i wrote in a few minutes ^^ just a rant.It has swearing in it,unlike me,so im not saving and we're not gonna record it. And as one o fmy rant songs,this is NOT supposed to be good.I want you all to think about the world as its going after you read this song.Think about everything. How can you call it war?[Explicit] I, feel the breeze Though, it gives me no ease I see bodies Falling from trees The beat of the drum Rolls off my thumb I see all wonder Walking through tundra [How-Can-You-Call-It-War? Mother fucker-fucker] Chorus Our own destruction Written from heart Rips you apart Call it [Fuck the system] Understand this America’s shit British feast Is the middle east []Chorus Don’t touch me LIFE IS CONCORDE MOTHERFUCKER
Your trying too hard to make it rhyme and to be honest the lines British Feast is the Middle East amused me and pissed me off at the same time considering that 2.5 Million+ British people went on a fucking protest against the wars in Iraq etc. Furthermore its too short, a better chorus could be made by child and I don't get a whole bunch of it. And if it isn't meant to be good then why post it?
Dude,it amuses and annoy's me aswell,being british myself. The song was written and posted as an outlet of feeling. and define child seriously,the song is just there,a political point. like the rest of the song,the chorus is there to release my feeling
i like the first and the second stanza...sounds something like green day (politically) and a bit of social and political Coldplay. a little improvement and it'll rock!