hey guy'z here's a new one that i've made, this is about when i was going thru a hard issue with my family like when i was around 10 or 11, and so i wrote about it now and i hope you like it, and for anyone that is going thru the same boat that i was going thru someone is there for you. "Burning out" This pain is killing me, killing me inside, seeing me cry wanting me to die, brusies, cut, tears, abuse, when will it stop how will i know, my mothers crying,he won't stop, scar's deep inside these fears of mine, i'm fighting now, and now it's my turn to give it back, but i'm not i'm better than that, i'm not him, i'm not stupid, i'm not dumb, you thought you could blind me forever, but you forgot that kids grow up, my wounds are being healed by someone that cares, i'm much stronger than you thought, now what do you have to say to that, i can't hear you, oh yeah that's right you're not apart of my life anymore!! BY *~*marissa*~* a.k.a kittie or riss
this is good but hard to read when you write your songs, try doing this This pain is killing me killing me inside seeing me cry wanting me to die brusies, cut, tears, abuse when will it stop how will i know otherwise this is good, if it was longer i think it would be amazing, keep working on new stuff