Held Under The Surface

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    erasethepain

    erasethepain Well-Known Member

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    My desire cries for aspiration as the fire
    burns from flames of self-indulgence
    Though I have chosen this path alone
    there is no sound of solitude in the midst
    Sickened by my own bliss, time has come
    tranquility has taken it's last breath
    Weep for one last glimpse, of what's so lost
    put these painful thoughts to rest

    Held under the surface, my thoughts of dispositon
    Surrounded by four walls, eyes burning of retribution

    My ambitions fall through sombered dusk
    from a sky filled with sorrow's dismay
    And somewhere in the distance is a cure
    for everything that's drifting us away
    Ambient are the eyes, why must they lust
    over what remains forever in the heart
    Look from the inside, so that you will find
    what has built us will slowly tear us apart
     
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    arT saveS

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    short...not bad...7/10
     
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    Andrea

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    Very good! :)
     

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