Comments would be very much apreciated...I've never really felt this unsure about a lyric. This is supposed to be turned into a song real soon and I want it to be just right before I call it finished. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Hard times and heartaches: If I sang about hard times and heartaches, would you sympathize with me? I know that it's obvious, I want some attention, But hey girl, that's just what I need I want to cling to the brightest stars, illuminate the sky I want to hold your heart, beating still, enrich my life Now I'm on my knees, begging to stay but you neglect all that has been It may be naive to act like there's hope left, when told it was all just a scheme Stripping the story of all of it's plotlines I don't want to push further on I'll wait here alone, I'll think of the past It grieves me to know I was wrong I want cling to the brightest stars, illuminate the sky I want to hold you heart, beating still, enrich my life But I know now, your true disguise I see it through your eyes I want to break your heart, like you have mine, an eye for an eye If I sang about hard times and heartaches, would you sympathize with me? And I sing about hard times and heartaches, Will you sympathize with me!? I want cling to the brightest stars, illuminate the sky I want to hold you heart, beating still, enrich my life
Beautiful. Very poetic. And I sing about hard times and heartaches, Will you sympathize with me!? I want cling to the brightest stars, illuminate the sky I want to hold you heart, beating still, enrich my life = Beautiful. Great work. *Applause*