You name it Pain written on a page, I frame it Hang it on the wall, look at it as I shame this Walk to the bed, stare at the clock as time wastes Forcing myself to sleep, a sharp bitter taste Try and shut my eyes, clutching the lie tight What I want isn't there to make me feel alright I can only pretend that you're next to me That you're next to me, but I can hardly see You're gone, and although I know for how long I don't understand why I feel so wrong It's all pain, burned on my brain, I feel worthless Hang it on the wall, and watch myself deserve this You say it I take it inside, with a needle I inject The toxin of every word of the subject A public display of rejection, I remain With too much faith, we're one in the same His projection is what's always been my subjection Every word and phrase you utter, an interjection What I want will never be and what you want hurts me Every minute is one step back from being free Your pain, I'll write it on this page and frame it Analyze every aspect and hope that I can attain this More pain, burned into my brain, I feel pathetic Hang it on the wall, and watch myself regret it I hang it on the wall, and watch myself deserve this I hang it on the wall, break inside and feel worthless
Is this influenced by a real arguement? It seems pretty personal. I like it. You always wear your heart on your sleeve when writing lyrics or poetry and it definitely pays off. Good work.
No, this was not influenced by an argument. This was really just written when I was kind of angry, I suppose, which I guess is why it seems like it was influenced by a quarrel of some sort. It is pretty personal, I would say. And thank you, I appreciate that.
well, normally im just reading some stuff but never have the will to give some feedback. this time, i really want to express my appreciation for this powerful piece of art. i love the image of "I hang it on the wall". even though there may be the cryout "emo" in the air, i have to say no, it's just pure expressionel emotion, if that makes any sense. thx for your work, i will keep it in a wordpad file because it really touched me personally.
Wow, man. That means a lot. Thank you. I really appreciate it. All emotional pieces nowadays cry out "emo". It's just hard to find pieces that are touching. I'm glad you found this piece to be so. Thank you.