Guide My Soul

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    Omar A

    Omar A Beyond Science LPA Super Member

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    Guide My Soul


    Verse 1:
    I wanna grab the knife
    And slit your throat
    Cuz you left me behind
    When I needed you the most
    And now I’m all alone
    Stuck in the darkest hole
    And I can’t be on my own
    I need someone to guide my soul

    Chorus:
    I cut myself till I bleed
    Just to check if I’m still alive
    And I cry myself to sleep
    Cuz you’re not here by my side

    Verse 2:
    I wanna grab your heart
    And slam it on the wall
    Cause you ripped me apart
    When I needed you to stop my fall
    And now I’m by myself
    Not knowing where to go
    And I can’t stay in this hell
    I need someone to guide my soul

    Chorus:
    I cut myself till I bleed
    Just to check if I’m still alive
    And I cry myself to sleep
    Cuz you’re not here by my side

    Bridge:
    Did you forget that I’m your son?
    When you were kicking me in the head
    And when you were loading the gun
    Did you really want me to be dead?

    Chorus:
    I cut myself till I bleed
    Just to check if I’m still alive
    And I cry myself to sleep
    Cuz you’re not here by my side
     
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    Leslie

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    Wow, that is incredibly powerful. Awesome work. :)
     
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    Adam

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    cool ^_^
     
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    Omar A

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    Thanks for the comments guys :)
     
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    Really good (and sad)
     
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    Omar A

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    Thanks
     
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    Trish

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    I read this the other day and forgot to reply.. :(

    I really like this, it really expreses how you feel and expresses what happened!

    Excellent Workage! :teehee:
     
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    Omar A

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    :eek: How dare you?

    You should apologize :angry:

    :p

    Thank you :D
     
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    Cassie

    Cassie The time to hesitate is through.

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    Wow Omar. :mellow:

    I'm at a loss... water! *raises her hand* lol.

    I'm so glad that one of us is an amazing songwriter. :p
     
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    Omar A

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    Thanks Cassie

    You're an awesome songwriter ;)
     
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    Cassie

    Cassie The time to hesitate is through.

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    Aaw... you lie! j/k Thanks. :blush:

    *offers you a lemon*

    :lol:
     
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    Omar A

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    :lol:

    Yummy

    *Gives you magic beans*
     
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    Andrea

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    Holy crap! :eek: I really like what you wrote. That's how I feel about my dad most of the time so I can sort of relate. :mellow: Excellent job.
     
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    *Field Of Innocence*

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    nice and powerful I like it ^_^
     
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    Omar A

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    Thanks Guys
     
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    wow thats such a powerful song. Its really great
     
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    nice job. :)
     
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    Omar A

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    Thanks guys. I really Appreciate your comments :)
     

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