Gripped

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    Alexis

    Alexis Extremely H! Vltg3

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    < intro >
    an eternity has passed
    since I have felt the sunlight on my face
    a shadow of myself
    I feel as though I've
    fallen from my own race

    < 1 >
    It was like I was a whisp of smoke
    fading into the air
    a dreamer left to rot away
    stone faced, but my insides tear
    then you came
    a cloud above broke
    what was empty overflowed
    but that light is over now

    < chorus >
    you've become a part of me
    you've taken me away
    your face has swallowed up my own
    my feet are drifting up, off the bottom
    and you're sweeping me away

    < 2 >
    I do not believe
    you know the damage you have caused
    while I greet you with smiles
    my eyes are blinded by tears
    your possession of my life
    is becoming my greatest fear

    < chorus >
    you've become a part of me
    you've taken me away
    your face has swallowed up my own
    my feet are drifting up, off the bottom
    and you're sweeping me away

    < bridge >
    you cannot see what lies inside
    though you could sense it in my eyes
    your loving arms are choking me
    you're sweeping me away

    < chorus 2x >
    you've become a part of me
    you've taken me away
    your face has swallowed up my own
    my feet are drifting up, off the bottom
    and you're sweeping me away
     
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    LinkinTheory

    LinkinTheory Well-Known Member

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    Not bad. (8/10)
     
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    Hybrid Soldier

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    It's good except for that "you've become a part of me" just keeps reminding me of LP. 8/10.
     

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