Grammie

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    whenthisbegan

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    Grammie

    You brought me strength and you were my shield
    You knew much more than anybody - before everybody else
    You kept my secrets hidden and have taken them with you

    Now you can rest and be free of pain
    Spend hours upon hours with your loved ones without saying goodbye
    Nothing to worry about or anybody to check up on

    You're free from the binds that held you here on earth
    You don't have to worry about trying to breathe or the feeling of worthlessness
    You can be happy up in Heaven

    It was hard to lose you and to watch you suffer
    To see you laying there helpless and discolored
    To watch you take one last breath and disappear

    It was weird to come home from my trip to find out what had happened
    But I never once left your side no matter how hurt I was feeling
    Since you were there for me, I was there for you

    You are watching over me, sad that I am hurting
    But I don't want you to feel the guilt because you're better off now
    You're not laying in a bed or sitting in a wheel chair unhappy about your life

    I love you and I always will, that will never change
    The pain will eventually go away
    So don't worry about me, I will be okay.


    <div align=center>Rest In Peace
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    Vicki Tanner - Oct. 03
     
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    arT saveS

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    Wow...thats really, really good. I love the whole thing. The lyrics sound like you actually wrote this...and didn't just slap it together to say you wrote a song...unlike other people on these forums. Sorry about your grandma. :(
     
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    whenthisbegan

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    Actually, it was a poem and I did read it. I was trying to find some sort of closure to my Grammie's death, but it's not helping. :(

    Nothing I wite I 'slap together'. I might get ideas from something I saw on TV but I write it out in my own way.
     
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    arT saveS

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    Actually, it was a poem and I did read it. I was trying to find some sort of closure to my Grammie's death, but it's not helping. :(

    Nothing I wite I 'slap together'. I might get ideas from something I saw on TV but I write it out in my own way. [/b][/quote]
    I know, I meant your song had true emotion in it, and you actually thought about it when you wrote it. A lot of people on here just make up stories or they are all like writing about pain, when they have the most perfect life (######' posers! :angry: ) But your poem*(sorry, song and poems are the same to me) was really good, and it makes me believe it really is about a grandma that died, instead of somebody who said their grandma died even though she didn't, just to write the song.
     
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    Andrea

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    I'm very sorry to hear that your grandmother died. I hope you can get through this tough time. I like what you wrote. I can tell it really came from the heart.
     
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    whenthisbegan

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    It depends. I mean, it's weird. I'll wake up all cheery and then something strikes a cord inside of me and I start to cry. Or I come to the realization that she's never going to be here ever again and it hurts. I was there when she was in the hosptial for her stroke, and I was there for her last final moments. I was always there for her just like she was for me, and I miss her more than anybody could ever know.

    It did come from the heart. I kind of went into this zone and wrote it, I didn't know what I said until I was done.

    And thank you.. :)
     

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