Got a verse?

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    Ether

    Ether Well-Known Member

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    Got a verse (rap or otherwise) that you want to share, or just feel like letting your feelings out here and now...well go ahead!! The floor is yours...


    Take it to the edge and see how the moon shines,
    Lyrical measurements so the world can hear the base lines,
    Multi-complex shadows waiting for the right time,
    To force it out the 09
    And slowly drop their night rhymes.

    I whipped that up then.... ^_^





    ** remember a verse, no 5 page pieces :p
     
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    El Muerto

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    She can’t hide no matter how hard she tries
    Her secret disguise behind the lies
    And at night she cries away her pride
    With eyes shut tight and staring at her inside
    All her friends know why she can’t sleep at night
    All her family asking if she's all right
    All she wants to do is get rid of this hell
    Well all she's gotta do is stop kidding herself
     
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    Ether

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    hmmmm....sounds familiar :lol:
     
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    El Muerto

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    Some guy, I think his name is Shanoda or Shinoda, stole this lyrics from me couple of years ago. He put them into a rap song even though I wrote it to country music. Sick bastard
     
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    Ether

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    Some guy, I think his name is Shanoda or Shinoda, stole this lyrics from me couple of years ago. He put them into a rap song even though I wrote it to country music. Sick bastard [/b][/quote]
    ahhh see thats why copyright was invented...tisk tisk....

    :lol:
     
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    El Muerto

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    ahhh see thats why copyright was invented...tisk tisk....

    :lol: [/b][/quote]
    Ain't life a bitch :lol:
     
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    Ether

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    Ain't life a bitch :lol: [/b][/quote]
    yup sure is...how long did it take you to figure that out :p
     
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    Arhaz

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    Some guy, I think his name is Shanoda or Shinoda, stole this lyrics from me couple of years ago. He put them into a rap song even though I wrote it to country music. Sick bastard [/b][/quote]
    DUDE!!! :lol:
     
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    El Muerto

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    DUDE!!! :lol: [/b][/quote]
    Pssst!
     
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    Luke

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    Some guy, I think his name is Shanoda or Shinoda, stole this lyrics from me couple of years ago. He put them into a rap song even though I wrote it to country music. Sick bastard [/b][/quote]
    I believe his name is Mike shangoga and he is releasing a solo album called mouse-huge or somthing which features bands called Styles of Unknown,Uncommon,Holy Book and Ron Myth or somthing like that. Well atleast thats the talk from th' old town :lol:
     
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    El Muerto

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    I believe his name is Mike shangoga and he is releasing a solo album called mouse-huge or somthing which features bands called Styles of Unknown,Uncommon,Holy Book and Ron Myth or somthing like that. Well atleast thats the talk from th' old town :lol: [/b][/quote]
    Shangoga, right! That's his name!
    Thanks!

    He's releasing a solo album? :angry:
    I won't be buying it.

    :lol:
     
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    Ether

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    Who the hell is he anyway? He never really talks much...

    :p
     
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    Linja

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    Shangoga, right! That's his name!
    Thanks!

    He's releasing a solo album? :angry:
    I won't be buying it.

    :lol: [/b][/quote]
    :lol:
     
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    Boo

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    Okay this sounds like a sixth grader's little stupid song they would sing in choir class at school...

    It is everywhere you see
    it is in the air you breathe
    it is inside you and me

    Love is all around you now
    if you believe you'll find out
    It is in the walls of your house
    sleep to the sound

    When you have forgotten about love
    Just remember who you are
    and you will find the one

    I made it into a song on my comp and believe me- it sounds better as a song than a poem read like above.
    It sucks
     
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    Ether

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    I thinks its cool Boo!....love to hear the song one day! :D
     
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    Glenn

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    Check ya sig. :lol:
     
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    Ether

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    part of the sig patrol hey... :p
     
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    minuteforce

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    You're all
    Pumped up, puffed up, ready to fight
    But have you got any hot rhymes to shine under the light?
    You're just buyin' the music, someone else writin' your shit
    So when real emcees take the stage, you'd better be ready for it
    And you feel it, watch the words nail you down
    You can tell you've been beaten, taken straight to the ground
    Brace yourself, it's coming, and you're heading for the end
    Anything you've got to say now is just irrelevant
    All that fake, commercial shit can got out your window
    And be ready for me too, I'm coming for you, so
    You'd better run, you'd better run real fast
    'Cause the next verse you rap may well be your last
    I execute precisely, killin' it with energy
    You're just talking loud, saying nothing, you're not an emcee
    Be careful what you say, man, I'll spit until you drown
    Step out of line, you'll be history by the next round
    - The_Chemist

    a verse i wrote a while back... i posted it an earlier version in a freestyling thread on the FM boards.
     
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    heshboy

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    I wrote this during Saunderitos(how do you spell it?) RAP topic, but didn't post it.

    Heshboys got that skill that gets you killed for not paying your bills
    I told you I am back and not standing still
    Here to collect checks putting your face on the grill
    This barbeques got you all in a frill
    Chill till I get my money you owed to me
    Stepping back on the streets with new beats for hunting
    I am putting up a concert for ladies in tight skirts
    Went to church, and left with everything burnt
    Filling up the seats, but leaving out the dead beats
    Change your sheets cause I can see your sweating
    I am not letting you go with out seeing the secret weapon
    There’s going to be destruction when I find out you’re fronting
    Trying to pretend like you’re something and not stepping
    Were going to ride this night looking for a nice fight
    Step on the pedal or get out of the car door, or I’ll put you to work on the streets looking for Uncle who’s poor


    I’ll beat you as easy as taking pickles out of a jar
    Making a sandwich and still on par
    Cooking with best with raw fish
    I am getting rock solid doing the bench press
    Strutting through the 24 with rocking some more
    Slapping some bitches this is gore
    Holler back at me from 1st and 2nd
    Here’s the next lesson
    Get back at me with a Porsche or Chevy or step into detention
    I didn’t mention that I would strap you to listening
    No smudges on my shirt, because I stay off the dirt
    No wrinkles in my cuffs, but I stay hard at work
    Everyone is giving gifts at birth
    Mine is to make sure you’re paying your purse
     
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    Ether

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    The chemist - rather good.....indeedy!

    Heshboy- getting better....why didnt you post it???
     

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