Goodbyes (Easy Way Out)

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    Cal

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    Cal, Sep 7, 2003



    Goodbyes (Easy Way Out)
    Written by Cal Kennedy (Suicidal Smile)
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    [Chorus]
    Im left alone in shame
    So who am i to blame
    So what is left to do
    Im torn apart by you
    I cannot take this pain
    The storys always the same
    So what is left to do
    Im torn apart by you

    [Verse 1]
    If i take another pill
    Will it silence you forever
    You've left me on my knees
    My heart is left in the dark
    Why must i feel this way
    Please wont you take it all away

    [Chorus]
    Im left alone in shame
    So who am i to blame
    So what is left to do
    Im torn apart by you
    I cannot take this pain
    The storys always the same
    So what is left to do
    Im torn apart by you

    [Verse 2]
    Tomorrow is the end
    You've seen the last of me
    Ive wasted to much time
    On people just like you
    Im going to leave you all
    Im going to forget you all

    [Chorus]
    Im left alone in shame
    So who am i to blame
    So what is left to do
    Im torn apart by you
    I cannot take this pain
    The storys always the same
    So what is left to do
    Im torn apart by you

    [Bridge]
    Why is there hurt in this world
    And whys it focused on me
    So what is left to do
    Im torn apart by you
    Why is there hurt in this world
    And whys it focused on me
    So what is left to do
    Im torn apart by you

    [Chorus]
    Im left alone in shame
    So who am i to blame
    So what is left to do
    Im torn apart by you
    I cannot take this pain
    The storys always the same
    So what is left to do
    Im torn apart by you
     
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    John.

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    John., Sep 7, 2003



    Chorus is real good, Verses are too short. I wasn't really gettin' a feel for them, and the bridge is like longer then the verses, lol. Anyway, you'll get better. Peace :)
     
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    Andrea

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    Andrea, Sep 7, 2003



    ^agrees.

    It's still really good though. :)
     
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    MaDd BoKo 03, Sep 8, 2003



    yea...i think you should make the verses much longer..like i could picture that as a LB song..so make the vereses long like Fred Durst does, i mean you are fred durst after all lol...so go for it dude..but other than that....a+ on the lyrics
     
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    Casual D, Sep 13, 2003



    Yeah I mean this is Fred Durst you're critiquing here man!! THE LEAD SINGER OF LIMP BIZKIT IS POSTING HIS LYRICS FOR APPROVAL. :eek:

    :lol: hehehe...
     
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    Omar A

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    Omar A, Sep 13, 2003



    I Love it!!! but I think the song should be called "torn apart by you" but Goodbyes isn't a bad title.
     
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    Dedicated, Sep 13, 2003



    Dude, that's awesome ^_^
     
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    Cal

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    Cal, Sep 13, 2003



    Worth the World

    hey guys thanks for all your comments, check out my newest song, i think its my best yet, what do u think?
     
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    annashinoda

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    annashinoda, Sep 13, 2003



    cool lyrics man! :D
     

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