gathering of poetry s***

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    Fenix Pharell

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    well, i'l ost 2 songs and 3 poems(no need for more, cause the poems repeat theirselves just diferent lyircs and stuff...but contents are similiar)
    (i'ma gonna double post i think)

    [color=&quot]First song: Come with me[/color]
    Here it comes….
    [more paople saying faded come with me's, that belnd together]
    Come with me X 7

    [rap like in It;s goin down]
    Come with me and see how it ought to be
    In a place where rock and rap are the same
    In a place where there is a flame
    Where you can sing and get fame

    Come with me in a room where it is all round
    Where the songs surround
    Where you can hear the sound
    Come with me and hear the best so far I’ve found

    [chorus: when it says "come with me" the voice is really low and sampled(kinda like the added words in Frg/10), then a normal rhythmic talking with accent on the last word]
    Come with me… To place where it’s best
    Come with me… And you can scream out of your chest
    Come with me… But then You’ll gasp for breath
    Come with me… And eventually meet death

    [again, rap like in It's goin down]
    Come with me and hear the screaming voices
    Scream yourself, make all the noises
    It’s good, I tell you it relaxes
    Come and leave the masses

    Come with me leave everyone behind
    And come to a place where you can unwind
    Unfortunately, you can’t rewind
    And eventually you don’t know where you wind

    [chrus: same instructions]
    Come with me… To place where it’s best
    Come with me… And you can scream out of your chest
    Come with me… But then You’ll gasp for breath
    Come with me… And eventually meet death

    [first verse it says "come wtih me" then suddenly stops for a few seconds, then returns to normal voice]
    Come with me the last invitation
    Don’t turn it down, feel the vibration
    Come help creation
    Come create a new Nation.

    Come with me if you haven’t come yet
    Come with me and take a deep breath
    Don’t’ look back at what you left
    The memories are no longer kept


    Come with me… To place where it’s best
    Come with me… And you can scream out of your chest
    Come with me… But then You’ll gasp for breath
    Come with me… And eventually meet death


    [color=&quot]Second song: Thank you[/color]
    [kinda like Amy Lee's voice from Evanescence, only lower, she's singing on My Immortal type rhythm]
    I was about to walk out
    When you came to me
    I was about be knocked out
    The light i couldn’t see
    My wounds aren’t gone
    But they are healed
    I’m not alone
    I’m no longer kneeled
    Pain i have overcome
    The brightness finally come
    The night has passed away
    I finaly see the day

    [bridge:this time teh voice suddenly rises a bit, teh accent is put on the last word]
    The pain was torturing me
    The darkness had overcome me
    But a spot of light seemed to appear
    And it came near, and near

    [chorus:now it's higher]
    Thank you for pulling me out of the dark
    Thank you for giving me my piece of spark
    And now I’m laughing throughout the day
    And hopefully my happiness will stay

    [goes l;ow again]
    Running children throughout the grounds
    And i was sitting there, alone with my thoughts
    But now i’m done
    Look what i’ve become
    Dying every day
    The wounds were there to stay
    But finally i got rid of them
    By listening to and anthem
    The anthem made me strong
    Showed me where i belong
    And now I’m running fast
    But can’t forget my past

    [bridge: same instructions]
    The pain was torturing me
    The darkness has overcome me
    But a spot of light seemed to appear
    And it came near, and near

    [chorus: same instructions]
    Thank you for pulling me out of the dark
    Thank you for giving me my piece of spark
    And now I’m laughing throughout the day
    And hopefully my happiness will stay

    [again, the low voice]
    I would just stay and watch the ceiling
    Untill i met this feeling
    And now i sit and talk
    And through the light i walk
    I’m finally notalone
    Finally have a home
    My thoughts are gathering
    Such a wonderful thing!
    I’ll never go away
    I’ll never leave the day
    From now i’m here to stay
    This feeling is so great

    [bridge:this time the voice only rises a bit]
    The pain was torturing me
    The darkness has overcome me
    But a spot of light seemed to appear
    And it came near, and near

    [chorus: now again it rises, but the last word(stay) will be very ver long]
    Thank you for pulling me out of the dark
    Thank you for giving me my piece of spark
    And now I’m laughing throughout the day
    And hopefully my happiness will stay

    [when the stay word starts to fade, this one is the highest peak f the voice]
    And now that I am so happy and glad
    I want to tell you that you are all I have
    And from now on I am going to follow
    The force that has taken me out of my sorrow

    [chrus: the vocie doesn't realy get lower, but on each verse it lowers a bit. in the end, the word STAY will become jut a fading sound in the background]
    Thank you for pulling me out of the dark
    Thank you for giving me my piece of spark
    And now I’m laughing throughout the day
    And hopefully my happiness will stay…













    These were the songs. they may sound hard to reproduce, and they ahven';t been actualy sung yet, but they might one day:)
     
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    Fenix Pharell

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    Now the poetry

    [color=&quot]First one: let the blood spill[/color]
    Let the blood spill
    Let the massacre begin
    The end of the world is near
    Let the knives spin.

    Let the Earth stop spinning
    Let us all wake up
    Let the knives start cutting
    Let the world break up.

    Let the evil and good die
    And the world to be dead in ditches
    Let us stop living a lie
    And make come true our wishes.

    In Hell let’s burn
    Or in heaven be happy
    May the wheels turn
    If we’re lucky

    Let the blood go
    Let the world die
    Let everybody know
    To stop livin a lie.

    [colr="red"]second one:teh room[/color]
    In the room of darkness
    In the house of doom
    I’m sitting among sadness
    In that room…

    I try to scream
    But no one hears me
    I try to dream
    But my thought deceives me…

    I’m waiting for something
    I don’t know what
    To save me from this nothing
    In which I am trapped…

    But nothing ever happens
    And I continue sitting
    In this room of darkness
    Where i am disappearing….

    Into a world of death
    I’m all alone
    I lost all I had
    And the fault is my own

    So finally I see a light
    It shines blindly upon me
    Takes me out of the night
    And then i wake up screamin…

    My life is a dream and nothing is real
    Light and happiness are fake
    It’s so unreal
    It’s a big mistake…

    So I wake up and end back in that room
    And try to sleep and forget everything
    But I can’t, I’m doomed
    To live forever in this nothing.

    [color=&quot]third one:untitled[/color]
    Blood shall pour
    The world's no more
    Death has come
    The Apocaliptic run
    It's poring and pouring and pouring
    Everybody's running
    But there's no escape
    Only sorrow, anger and regrets
    Death is near can you not smell it?
    Can't you feel is' razor blade?
    Can't you fell the black sharp knife?
    How does the grass feel when it's cut?
    Does it bend and await for it's end?
    Or does it try to run, not knowing it stands still?
    But this time there will be no revival
    No generation afterwards
    For this knife shall cut you all
    The smells is stronger, the smell of death
    It's hidden behind those bushes
    with a sniper pointed at you
    Ready to grab eveyone with it's hands
    Take you all in Hell where you belong
    Rotting and waiting for someone else to save you
    But no one wil come, you don't deserve a saviour
    This is not a movie
    this is just real life
    This will al jsut hapenn
    After I shal strike.
    Let the blood pour
    let the people rot
    The the word die in pain sour
    Let me not.
     
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    Fenix Pharell

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    myeash..no replies
     
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    Trish

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    TIP: Try putting each poem/song in a different thread.

    It will be easier to read and you will get more comments.
    And also if you have titles that make sense.
     
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    Nikki

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    Random point: Why the hell does everyone use rhyming couplets? <_>'
     
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    I don't :lol: ;)
     

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