From The Inside

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    Will

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    From The Inside

    Yesterday, I walked right by you, alone, again
    And I opened my mouth to speak to you, but then
    Nothing exited my mouth but a heavy sigh
    And I can't speak to you no matter how hard I try
    It seems as though I'm missing my chances
    And it seems we grow closer with all of the glances
    I act as though you're never around me
    And it looks as though you've finally found me
    I can't stand the fact I'm scared to death
    And here I stand; I'm down to my last breath

    Every time I pass you by
    I scream at myself from the inside
    I don't know the reason why
    'Cause I've got nothing here to hide

    Today, I just couldn't bring myself to speaking
    And I just couldn't stop or help myself from thinking
    That I'm falling away faster every single day
    And every time I feel that I'm finally ready to say
    Something inside me pulls me back from you
    And I've had plenty of chances to think it all through
    Sometimes I'll look at you and not want to stop
    And I want to be with you and realize that I'm not
    I can't stand the fact I'm scared to death
    And here I stand; I'm down to my last breath

    Every time I pass you by
    I scream at myself from the inside
    I don't know the reason why
    'Cause I've got nothing here to hide
    Sometimes I just want to cry
    Because, in you, I want to confide
    Next to you I want to lie
    My love for you can't be denied

    Tomorrow, I hope things can change
    This whole ordeal seems rather strange
    While every day I love you more
    I just can't stand being scared anymore

    Every time I pass you by
    I scream at myself from the inside
    I don't know the reason why
    'Cause I've got nothing here to hide
    Sometimes I just want to cry
    Because, in you, I want to confide
    Next to you I want to lie
    My love for you can't be denied

    Every time I pass you by
    I scream at myself from the inside
    I don't know the reason why
    'Cause I've got nothing here to hide
    Sometimes I just want to cry
    Because, in you, I want to confide
    Next to you I want to lie
    My love for you can't be denied


    Please leave your comments. :)
     
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    Anthony.

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    If you knew how much I relate to this now... Great work.
     
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    Omar A

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    OMG!!! This is so good. Keep on writing.
     
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    Will

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    Thanks, guys.

    I didn't mean to title it "From The Inside," but it was the only part of the chorus that I really liked to use as a title. The original title was "Sick," but that didn't fit the song at all.

    Any more comments would be awesome. :)
     
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    Kate

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    I loved it. Almost anyone can relate.
     
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    Incredible. I most definitely relate.
     
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    It's great work. I can definitely relate.
     
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    Methybrea

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    Good stuff! As usual the song has amazing flow, good rhymes, and this song (as you can tell by the reactions) can really connect with the audience!

    9.5/10!!
     
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    Will

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    Hey guys. Thanks for the comments. :D
     
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    whoa...that is great, just like everyone else said, i to, can relate
     
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    Andrea

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    Superior work, Will. Like I've said before, you've got talent. Keep up the great work. :)
     
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    Metamorphosiss

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    WoW thats awesome! Will, good work -- very good!
     
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    Yeah, Will.......thats awesome.....we should make a band :lol:
     
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    THATS AWSOME! :p
     
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    Mrs.Shinoda

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    that is AWESOME!!!!!! i definitely relate to it! good job, and keep writing; you've got serious talent in writing!!!!
     
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    Will, I'll hand it to you - you are awesome at this stuff. Look at the size of that monster :lol:. That's awesome, and almost anyone can relate. Good job, your stuff just keeps getting better and better... :D
     
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    ackem. good stuff... :)

    to tell you the truth... unlike most people here, i cant really relate to what you wrote. but i have to admit, you did it so well that i have a pretty good idea of what it would feel like... from the inside... just one question, is that how you really feel? is it all true?
     

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