Frightened Away From Life

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    Nowhere Kid

    Nowhere Kid Well-Known Member

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    Here's a song I wrote, like the Description says, it's very personal. It couldn't describe how I feel now any better. Feedback is appreciated.

    Frightened away from life

    I'm not alone, but I wish I was
    I'm scared of my life again
    It wasn't close, to even this bad
    Before he came back again
    I don't know how to explain
    The emotions that are inside
    But everytime I see his face
    I want to run and hide

    [chorus]
    Why did I get into this?
    How did it come up?
    Why am I not myself again?
    It doesn't feel like love
    I wish I could go far away
    To a place of my own
    Because I'm frightened away from my life

    It started out okay, I grew anxious soon to come
    I'm still scared of my life again
    He told me these things
    That brough discomfort onto me
    These words I'd never heard before
    Every touch breaks me apart
    Every word is cruel
    Someday I wish, I could get the upperhand
    In this manic duel

    [chorus]

    When I find somewhere to belong
    I know that it's all wrong

    I need to be alone
    Somewhere on my own

    [chorus]

    Frightened away from, Frightened away from my life.
     
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    lpaddict

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    its good but the lyrics resemble some lp songs which is not cool
     
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    tkd_rap

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    only thing i can find is the "Somwhere i belong" part. Other than that, and one other thing, not a bad song! keep it up
     
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    Nowhere Kid

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    To be honest, when I read it over I realized the same thing. I really need more music variety...
     

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