here i go back to the angry stuff... i'm sick and tired of saying i'm sorry for all the things in the past stop going on at me and crying, how long is this gonna last i'm not apologising anymore for all the things that i used to be god leave it aone stop your moaning god can you not see this is ruining what we've got and i can't go on listening to all this garbage your not an angel either and you've hurt me too but i get on and manage to forgive and forget and get on with life as it is why can't you do the same as going on like this is taking the piss if you go on like this we'll end up with no friendship and don't start looking and giving me that lip yeah, it hurts to be honest but just get on with it for god's sake grow up and stop being a bitch!
well, you just seem to have experienced lots of stuff though i know not everything we write has to do with our experiences. This one's very realistic, and that's what i liked about it, you show a problem which afects us all and that has become part of our lives, we can't just get rid of it easily. Congrats, it's a very good one! You just get better every day
i guess i have experienced lots but when you have been on the earth as long as me, you tend too! this poem was about a fiend of mine that i have known pratically all my life but, i guess it's something i would never tell her to her face. i guess most of us have felt this at some point in time. thanks alot for your possitve comments, you've been sooo good to me and given my support from day 1!
I have observed that you always use these and in every comment, just felt like saying it :whistle: ,and coming to the poem I think this poem has been written as you have felt it,rather than made up feelings,your feelings in the poem are genuine,I liked the words used,they are strong and make an impact,you have surely become better by the day,keep it up.
Wow. It's really heartfelt, I really like this. I wish I was able to write something like this, but I haven't been on this earth long enough lol. I've experienced most of my written work ... but theres not enough to write about... Wow. Lol. Keep it up!! An' thanks for your support with my lyrics an' poems ...
no probs torn rose! i see talent in you and believe me, once you have experience love and hate, you will have plenty to talk about!
great work. i agree with everyone, this is really heartfelt and makes an impact. good work. keep it. i believe this is your best. everyone else has said everything i wanted to say so ill leave it at that (thought i better add them in LOL)