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    Will

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    I wrote this poem based on the first few lines of Alacrity622's poem here. I've always wanted to do something like this after seeing Mark's (LPFAN05) signature, and I picked up a rhythm and went with it.

    FOREWORD

    You’re like a papercut, crawling in my skin
    I don’t know where to start or where to begin
    But I know that everything you say to me
    Is reminding me that you’re pushing me away
    I’m one step closer to being by myself
    And in the end I know I’m lost on the shelf
    I won’t run away, no, I’ll stay with you
    I may be forgotten but I’ll see us through
    A place for my head is nowhere in sight
    I pray this cure for the itch will be all right
    These points of authority are always being broken
    So I'm breaking that habit tonight
    You say you're feeling numb and faint, all right
    But what about all those things you said to me?
    The condescending talk of who I outta be?
    I've been lying from you all along
    Don't stay, I need to find somewhere I belong
    I've been twisted around like the figure.09
    This session is all I got left that's mine
    I hit the floor because nobody's listening
    But it's easier to run while the dew is glistening
    I'll take everything from the inside and leave
    Because you're all that I really don't need
     
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    Terry

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    Wow, that's ######'' great, Will! You even found a way to put Figure.09 in there. Gotta give credit to Mark and Alacrity622 poems, too. Anyways, all of them are good. That's so cool how people make poems like that. I wonder if anyone will add songs from EP or something....
     
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    Will

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    I could.
     
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    haha, that was awesome!
     
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    OMG that was so cheesy. :p

    Not bad for a rap, though.
     
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    I like it! :D
     

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