For the Acts, By the Axe

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    Matt

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    I'm joining a band, and they want me to send them some song ideas, so I'm sending him these lyrics, and some guitar tracks that I need to record.

    We stand together, yet alone
    Against this force of the unknown
    To divide and fall apart
    Is to give in to the fall

    Defeat
    Adversary
    Requiem
    For the dream
    We stand
    Not a chance
    But a trial
    By the axe

    The blade will fall through the neck
    Pierce, tear apart, and burn the flesh

    Requiem
    For the dream

    You do not accept defeat
    From this vile enemy
    To hang your life up high
    To let your death be finalized

    Defeat
    Adversary
    Requiem
    For the dream
    We stand
    Not a chance
    But a trial
    By the axe

    The blade will fall through the neck
    Pierce, tear apart, and burn the flesh
    We stop at nothing on this trek
    Through the eyes of death the blade will thresh

    We stand trial
    For the acts
    In denial
    We swing the axe

    Defeat
    Adversary
    Requiem
    For the dream
    We stand
    Not a chance
    But a trial
    By the axe

    The blade will fall through the neck
    Pierce, tear apart, and burn the flesh
    We stop at nothing on this trek
    Through the eyes of death the blade will thresh

    Defeat adversary

    Any criticism is helpful, as I really would like to get into this band. If I can, I'll post the guitar tracks when they're done.
     
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    Arhaz

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    aweomse. very strong for a short song. you could add another verse. but don't listen to me if you feel otherwise. great job, and best of luck man.
     
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    Matt

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    Thanks. :)
     
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    Linja

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    I love the title, and the poem. Powerful. Good luck with the band.
     
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    Matt

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