Flaws + Honesty = More Flaws

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    The Emptiness Machine

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    Flaws + Honesty = More Flaws

    I'm an idiot
    I'm a jerk, no point lying.
    Clearly, but I admit it
    Is that just an excuse?
    It sure is

    But who's pretending?
    I have my flaws
    I can't say I don't give a shit
    Because I apparently do
    Still, I'll take this time
    To name the other assorted flaws

    I'm legally blind
    My poetry stinks
    I'm so lost spiritually
    I've done shitty things
    I used people
    I hurt them too
    Admiting things is really hard for me

    So what will you think of me
    When this is all done and through?
    When you find out that I'm not so perfect
    World, what will you do?

    Should I not be so blunt?
    And keep things to myself?
    Fuck I'd feel so traped

    But who's pretending?
    I have my flaws
    I can't say I don't give a shit
    Because I apparently do
    Still, I'll take this time
    To name the other assorted fruit
     
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    Speed Freak

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    great poetry ....... theme = remorseful ? ...
     

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