Fictional Memories

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    esaul17

    esaul17 antichrist

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    Fictional Memories

    A fantasy of epic proportions
    Reality with drastic distortions
    Variable dimensions for the time and place
    The perpetual constant is her face
    So vividly clear in my dreams
    But an illusion cannot be what it seems
    A beautifully pathetic and empty shell
    A mental replication that is known too well
    But a shadow cannot be embraced and held tight
    Warmth cannot be found in the dark of the night
    The words "I love you" from a mouth with no voice
    And I mirror the sentiment without a choice
    But the sculpture shatters as it's held to my chest
    Piercing the lies with which I'm dressed
    Collapsing the world built in my mind
    Returning to the reality I'd left behind
    Leaving me searching and grasping desperately
    At the smoke that is my fictional memory

    Wow haven't written anything in a month or so. I think I'm a bit rusty.
     
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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    rusty? you call that rusty? that shit is peeling the rust off of me... which is a good thing. man, you inspire me...
     
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    Mk_Spike

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    hes exactly right,thats good stuff man
     
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    minuteforce

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    this is the kind of thing that i would write. so i think it's great. i think the last line sort of kills it, though ... ;) ...just my opinion. <.<
     
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    esaul17

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    Thanks guys.
     

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