This is a song called fallen....now im just writing this as the thoughts come so tell me your true opinions on this one FALLEN Tryin so hard to keep from slippin All these thoughts in my mind and im trippin Every time i think ive made it to the top All my pain pulls me down and the hurtin dont stop Chorus i fallen and im stugglin to stand usin all my strength no one to take my hand all alone, nothin to do i just gotta try and forget what ive been through Pushin me down, pullin me down gettin harder to breathe, suffocating me now fallin at a pace so fast regreting all the times i let myself slip i wanna kick myself in the ass studdering over every word that i say its my fault that im fallin this is my price i must pay i gave in too many times, now here i am writin sad lines but its only feelings that everyone feels these aint for attention these are actually real Chorus im fallin and im struggling to stand usin all my strength no one to take my hand all alone, nothin to do i just gotta try to forget what ive been through (bridge) its my fault that the top is so far away i slip and lose my grip in almost every way i shouldnt give in to all your games you belong on the wall of shame treatin me like im the b!tch well im keepin you away throwin you to the ditch Chorus im fallin and struggling to stand usin all my strength no one to take my hand all alone nothin to do i just gotta try to forget what ive been through
wow.. congrats.. i can actually see that as a real song. are you actually plannin to put music with it? anywho.. its good yar.. peace and dust! keep it up..!
yea since im movin i gotta start a new band but when i do im gonna put that into music, ive written so many songs even though their depressing they talk about real life emotions so their very good and can be related to, thats the kinda goal im lookin for is to be able to have people relate to my writing and my feelings the way i do everyday..u know...well gotta go PEACE OUT