Eyeliner Tears

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    Nowhere Kid

    Nowhere Kid Well-Known Member

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    The description tells all! This is a poem I wrote.


    My life is fading to nothingness slowly
    One by one, these small delicacys fall away
    No longer of any use
    It seems as if I am but nothing as well
    They don't care
    They never did
    Living in a broken home of inferior insanity

    A graffiti wall of blue and black makeup
    Coat my cheeks as the screaming grows louder
    I cover my ears
    But the voices in my head are still roaring
    Eating me alive
    Killing me slowly
    Doing no good but making my anxiety grow

    All I have left is this corroded room
    My dirty floor
    No benefit to my life
    Yet, I have no life, it's been wasted away
    By this quarrelling and violence that they act out
    I'm trapped in this permanent eclipse
    Darkness and hell
    I wallow in sorrow and self-pity
    Drenching me in these Eyeliner Tears


    Sooooo...what'dya think? :mellow:
     
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    ass_kicker

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    very well done, dude. keep up the good work. i love it.
     
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    ass_kicker

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    im sorry im double posting... but i seriously love this poem.. its so good... eyeliner tears. its so me. its so true. so good. i guess its a girls point of view... but its really, REALLY great. please say something, other people reading this.
     
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    Nowhere Kid

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    :blush: Thanks...
     

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