Everything Falling Apart

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    a life in ashes

    a life in ashes mercury summer

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    Everything Falling Apart

    Everything falling apart,
    And my veins have all run dry,
    Everything falling apart,
    Glazed eyes now stare into the sky,
    Everything falling apart,
    I wear my crown of thorns,
    Everything falling apart,
    All perception seems torn,

    The consequences rendered,
    All the veins bled dry,
    I cry for my salvation,
    Heaven hear my cry,

    Everything falling apart,
    The waves come crashing down,
    Everything falling apart,
    Inside my tears of fire I drown,
    Everything falling apart,
    The days are getting shorter,
    Everything falling apart,
    My lord, don't wait any longer,

    The consequences rendered,
    All the veins bled dry,
    I pay my price in blood,
    When I go you'll all ask why,

    Everything falling apart,
    I can see you in the mirror,
    Everything falling apart,
    The mask I lived becoming clearer,

    The consequences rendered,
    All the veins bled dry,
    But I won't blame you for this death,
    It doesn't matter because I'm free,
    Your cold touch pushed from my chest,

    It doesn't matter because I'm free,
    Your cold touch pushed from my chest,
    It doesn't matter because I'm free,
    Your cold touch pushed from my chest.

    thoughts please...
     
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    The Outsider

    The Outsider Billy Corgan = God

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    i really like the repitition of everything falling apart !!
     
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    Stick N move

    Stick N move Well-Known Member

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    i don't really like the lyric itself.. with the repeation of everythings falling apart.. but when put into a good song.. it could end up masterful!
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

    D_A_V_I_D Pure Pwnage

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    I think it worked well in this song to. I call it a song as i can really hear it to music in my head. I really liked it.
     

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