Everyday I'm staring through this paper-thin glass Wondering if I'll ever have any chance Looking at you on the other side Wishing you knew how hard I've tried Broken apart from the inside out Wishing you were with me right now You peer through the glass as well Knowing that I'm hiding under this shell You know that sometimes it's hard Underneath it your heart is charred You'd like me to be with you as well Yet we've both gotten up and fell Throwing away all our emotions Blurring and distorting the commotion Someday we can make it all real Maybe then we can truly feel Everyday I live my life not knowing what it means I look through the pain and see my dreams Realizing just what you mean to me I'll take your troubles and your pains and set them free As I peer into your beautiful green eyes I wonder what it would be like to fly I'd grasp you and take you by the hand So we could soar above the sparkling sand About them all we can fly and be alive Yet all I can think about is how I tried I failed over and over, time again I see what needs to be done but then I walk into a sea of pain and drown myself Feeling inside the pain that I've held I look above and see you fly past Knowing that I want to make it last I'm going to win, I can't afford to lose But now I'm going to have to choose Either I tell you how I feel today Or go on suffering some other way Everyday I live my life not knowing what it means I look through the pain and see my dreams Realizing just what you mean to me I'll take your troubles and your pains and set them free Everyday I live my life not knowing what it means I look through the pain and see my dreams Realizing just what you mean to me I'll take your troubles and your pains and set them free Inside my mind I wonder if I'll ever find Answers to the questions burning deep inside Frozen to the wall an image of you stays Knowing that you'd never betray Deep inside your eyes I'm blinded by your love Then I look up and see you floating high above Everyday I live my life not knowing what it means I look through the pain and see my dreams Realizing just what you mean to me I'll take your troubles and your pains and set them free Deep inside your eyes I'm blinded by your love Then I look up and see you floating high above Deep inside your eyes I'm blinded by your love Then I look up and see you floating high above Everyday I live my life not knowing what it means I look through the pain and see my dreams Realizing just what you mean to me I'll take your troubles and your pains and set them free
Enough. [/b][/quote] Heh, I was wondering, because you have these spurts where you write four songs in a day, or at least you post them, lol.
Heh, I was wondering, because you have these spurts where you write four songs in a day, or at least you post them, lol. [/b][/quote] Nah, I post a song right after I write it, even if it sucks ass.
Nah, I post a song right after I write it, even if it sucks ass. [/b][/quote] Will, I would say you are pretty good, no lie. Most of the songs I write just rhyme, so you are at least better then me at it.
Will, I would say you are pretty good, no lie. Most of the songs I write just rhyme, so you are at least better then me at it. [/b][/quote] Thanks. I'm a novice at it, though. I'm trying to incorporate larger words and come up with more words to rhyme with, because most of my songs have the same words rhyming all the time.. lol.
Thanks. I'm a novice at it, though. I'm trying to incorporate larger words and come up with more words to rhyme with, because most of my songs have the same words rhyming all the time.. lol. [/b][/quote] Heh, same here. The song im working on right now I am trying to use bigger words, but I cant help to just keep rhyming in all the song.
Heh, same here. The song im working on right now I am trying to use bigger words, but I cant help to just keep rhyming in all the song. [/b][/quote] Yeah, writing a song is a lot harder than some people make it out to be, lol. I notice that sometimes I have to go back through and edit something because I've said the same thing three or four times, or I'll hear a song on the radio and think, "How can I change those lyrics around to make them fit better in my song?" and stuff.
Yeah, writing a song is a lot harder than some people make it out to be, lol. I notice that sometimes I have to go back through and edit something because I've said the same thing three or four times, or I'll hear a song on the radio and think, "How can I change those lyrics around to make them fit better in my song?" and stuff. [/b][/quote] I also do that, like for instance, if I just ended a line with me, four more later ill want another me and it sounds better, so I have to rework the other lines. Not to mention the song has to make sense. I mean, you cant be flying in the air then the next line be eating soup, you need to make it a story of some sort.
I also do that, like for instance, if I just ended a line with me, four more later ill want another me and it sounds better, so I have to rework the other lines. Not to mention the song has to make sense. I mean, you cant be flying in the air then the next line be eating soup, you need to make it a story of some sort. [/b][/quote] LOL! That happens to me a lot. One time I ended up rhyming "me" four times in a row, and I was like, "No, no that's not good at all," changed it and still didn't like it.
LOL! That happens to me a lot. One time I ended up rhyming "me" four times in a row, and I was like, "No, no that's not good at all," changed it and still didn't like it. [/b][/quote] lol, althrough depending on the "beat" of the song, it can kinda work in the bridge. But I havent tried that, no sir.
lol, althrough depending on the "beat" of the song, it can kinda work in the bridge. But I havent tried that, no sir. [/b][/quote] Not to diss LP or anything, but I don't want any song of mine to go: Why does it feel like night today? Something in here's not right today Why am I so uptight today? Paranoia's all I got left
It happens to me too. But i dont really care. I just want to rhyme and make everything fit excelently. who knows, one day I might become a famous MC. :whistle: btw, nice song, Will.
Yeah, I dont know how LP comes up with stuff like "Caught in the undertow, just caught in the undertow". When I first heard Numb I thought it had to do with fish.
Hahaha, no. It's a metaphor. Basically in the relationship the chick was pulling the guy under her and stepping all over him and whatnot.
Hahaha, no. It's a metaphor. Basically in the relationship the chick was pulling the guy under her and stepping all over him and whatnot. [/b][/quote] Yeah, I get it now, but the first time I heard it fish clicked. I think ill go get help now.
Yeah, I get it now, but the first time I heard it fish clicked. I think ill go get help now. [/b][/quote] Anyway, MORE COMMENTS PEOPLE!