Writing: "Everybody Lies" and "Gasoline."

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    Reflectionist

    Reflectionist Excuse me while I kiss the sky.

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    I wanted to share these two prose bits that I wrote and have been sitting on for a while. Hope you enjoy them. I was trying an attempt to write in 2nd person perspective, to really put YOU in my shoes and put YOU into the story in ways very few things do. I hope it was effective. Let me know what you think.

    ...Also, sorry, it's not music. lol.


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    Reflectionist

    Reflectionist Excuse me while I kiss the sky.

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    "Gasoline"

     
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    lime treacle

    lime treacle You are not alone Über Member

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    Fucking shit man, that's got to be the deepest, most abstract, most accurate displayal of human psyche I've ever seen.

    And it was quite hard for me to read with the level of English I have. :lol:
     
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    Reflectionist

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    Thanks for checking it out!
    I could've been a little more considerate with the english
     
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    lime treacle

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    Nah.
     

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