Okies, these are the first lyrics I've posted here in a while and tbh, they're quite odd but whatever. Hope you like 'em. Could you please comment on which name you prefer aswell? That'd be awesome. Thanks. "Everclear" or "Tease" I have found the perfect girl, But she's into nasty things, She's got pretty brown eyes, But the things she thinks make me cringe. Elisa is a naughty girl, She likes sex with total strangers, And when she's coming she likes to scream, She loves the cold of winter, Says it lets her wrap up nice and warm, In bed with a total stranger she met the night before. Baby's going crazy for the things she loves, Sex in the morning without protection after I come home drunk, She said she wants to use me all night long, As an apology for all the other guys and girls that she's done. Elisa is misguided, Doesn't knock it until she's tried it, But by now she's tried everything, She said she knows what she wants, And right now that thing is me, I'm just the flavour of the week apparently (and that's fine by me). I have found the perfect girl, But she smokes two packs a day, And she's into nasty things, Goes for men that are twice her age. I love that thing that you do with your tongue, Yeah, tease me, tease me, oh, Yeah, I love that thing that you do with your tongue, Oh, tease me, tease me. Baby's going crazy for the things she loves, Although in my opinion whips and chains are a bit too much, She said she wants to use me all night long, As an apology for all the other guys and girls that she's done.
I actually really, really like this one Great job. Brownies, jellybeans, and cookies for you. [edit] Everclear.
@Andrea: I said it was odd xD Thanks for the comments and that's 1 vote for Tease Oh and thanks for the brownies and the jellybeans etc that were in that comment before you removed 'em
That's pretty great, Dave. Odd as you said but I think it's intresting. I'll break the draw with voting for "Everclear". "Tease" would be the more obvious choice, but with this song obvious doesn't really fit for me.
Thanks a lot. I agree with you about the obvious thing. I was pushing for a title because I first just coded it Everclear 'cause when I started writing it, I was reminded of the type of lyrics they have. Then it started to remind me of Say Anything for some reason , this made me think that maybe Everclear wouldn't be a good name for it as it didn't remind me of them anymore. *Shrugs* 2-1
Damn you Dave, I write a fucking masterpiece and you get 7 replies just for writing about the subject of sex But honestly it's quite good, I could see it being used in one of those ''always were a condom'' adverts.