Melancholy, it matches your eyes Kissing your forehead I fall into arms, like you 'cause we both know: I might as well be dead Promise me, you'll be wearing white Stepping out of the dark And even the crows will be wearing... Promise me, you'll attend my funeral in white Sleepless nights, over days of dreaming Stroking your hair once more I fall out of harm, for you 'cause we both know: I've fought my battles ...and left you this war Promise me, you'll be wearing white Stepping out of the dark And even the crows will be wearing... Promise me, you'll attend my funeral in white Now promise me, you'll be wearing white And I assure you, so will I As long as you attend my funeral, Even the crows will be wearing white
Well I can't really explain it but some parts seem kinda odd to me, like those unfinished sentences and some parts like: But that's just me, it's more important that you are satisfied with your work
True. But it could've been that it was something technical or something like the structure of certain sentences, that made it seem a little weird. Better ask to be safe than sorry.