escape

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    Rhinoj87

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    i suck at spelling but bare with it


    ESCAPE
    so much stress
    all this uncertiny
    riding on my shoulder
    wanna just let it go
    let it go and escape

    you just look at me
    and suspects me to change
    from me to what you want me to be
    like im your personal servant
    i cant take this anymore
    (i never could but now im)

    letting it go
    and im escapeing
    escape
    escape

    your gonna have to except it

    i have to escape
    let it go
    this extra weight on my shoulder
    (i have to drop it)
    run away and escape

    i wanna be me
    im not changing to suit your needs
    (staying no chainging)
    escapeing
    (staying no chainging)
    i have to escape
    escape escape escape
    have to let go of
    all this extra weight
    i have to escape

    dont flame me about how much it sucks because im not that good
     
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    Rhinoj87

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    i think im better at making choruses then verses
     
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    Rhinoj87

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    Verse 1
    You never stop to feel
    Anything that could be real
    you pretend to look at me
    and suspect me to change
    from me to what you want me to be
    like im your personal servant
    i cant take this anymore
    (i never could but now im)
    letting it go
    and im escapeing
    from this world I never truly felt


    Chorus
    All this extra weight on my shoulder
    (I have two drop it)
    let it go
    runaway and escape
    let it go
    runaway and escape
    today

    Verse 2
    i wanna be me
    im not changing to suit your needs
    (staying no chainging)
    escapeing
    (staying no chainging)
    i have to escape
    escape escape escape
    have to let go of
    all this extra weight
    i have to escape

    Chorus
    All this extra weight on my shoulder
    (I have two drop it)
    let it go
    runaway and escape
    let it go
    runaway and escape
    today





    Ending
    Your going to have to except this
    I will not be ignored
    I will escape from this
    Drop the extra weight
    And find myself
    Again
    When I escape

    edit:repeat ending once

    is this better ive been working on it
    its basicly just more organized
     
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    [Darken Hybrid]

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    it's a nice song. i am currently writing a song similar to that. :lol:
     
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    Rhinoj87

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    cool thanx tell me when you make it
     
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    [Darken Hybrid]

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    I finished it, if you wanna check it out. Click Here
     

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