we all stand in a line awaiting to die like solders taking their orders this world is no longer natural, it's all constructed but the day will come when all will be destroyed cause we've pissed off the one that matters we all look towards the sky as the sky comes crashing down with us all standing still in a line we all come crashing to the ground the day has come and the world will end but not by our own devices as predicted but by a natrual phenomena in which we can't control this is the irony cause we go on about destroying our world except mother nature had her clock ticking all along our time here was only short like an experiment and now this experiment has ran out yes i know this is different but some comments would be nice!
it may be different but i believe it is some of your best work up to date. Great stuff. Totally amazing. Speachless. Just keep writing. Great work
thanks very much! i really didn't think i would get any replys! i actually wrote this a couple of weeks ago but i wasn't going to post it but i thought 'what the hell?' thanks again!