Dreamers Loving as Lovers Dreaming I'll give you all of my heart And still search for more to give And I'm sorry if it all sounds so repetitive When I say that you're so beautiful that your smile is like a dream, it seems and even though I call you "baby" glowing in the light of my halo I'm still an angel with broken wings Together in the twilight Peering through our glass We feel so close together But it's the comfort of a ghost that laughs I love it when you like me, baby And I love it when you say my name But even though my halo's glowing I'm still just a fallen angel with broken wings And I can't fly to you when you're lonely I can not quench your thirst or be the stream And if I ever kissed you, darling It was only in our dreams I'm sorry that I can't hold you Because I know how much it would mean And I know what we're waiting for.. And I know exactly what it'd mean... We can't forget what we're waiting for Even if it only comes in dreams Baby, you're all I've been waiting for But even if you were the highest queen I'd still just be a fallen angel, with broken wings
! It's very cute, And it flows quite well. I really like it. Something about this makes me like it. The first 4 lines are GOLDEN. I love them. And how you end each verse (or.whatchamacallit... LOL Whatchamacallit is not a misspelled word in Google's Chrome web browser) with "..a fallen angel, with broken wings" It's very poetic. The Want/Give and the perfection/imperfection, and the desire/apologetic can'ts are well done. It's like a perfect love poem of "want to love, but can't love" type of feel I may be a tad wrong about interpreting, but... Awesome poem man! !