Do You Understand?

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    Trish

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    When the rain falls from the sky and I'm all alone
    I wish for someone to be there with me
    I wrap my arms around myself and stare out the window
    Then I wish for someone elses arms to be holding me
    When I lay alone in my empty bed
    I wonder what you're doing and if you think of me

    Do you undersand what you mean to me?
    More than you think
    Do you understand what I feel for you?
    More than you feel for me

    When the tears fall from my eyes and I'm all alone
    I wish for you to be there with me
    I cut my arms, releasing pain, but still brings more
    Then I wish for your arms to be holding me
    Then I lay alone, in my empty bed, thinking of you
    I wonder if you care, and if you know me

    Do you understand what you mean to me?
    More than I mean to you
    Do you understand anything I'm saying?
    I didn't think so
     
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    Leslie

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    Trish, this is incredible... you have written such amazing lyrics/poety. I can really feel the emotion in it. AWESOME JOB!
     
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    linktolinkinpark

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    I love this, I can totally relate, if this was written because of personal experience, if not, I didn't say anything!!!! :whistle: but great lyrics or poetry or whatever, it was beautiful and meaningful!!!!
     
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    Trish

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    ^_^ Wow, thankyou very much for the FANTASTIC comment!
     
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    Hybrid_Bunny

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    I agree. You're really good at writing how you feel and turning it into a beautiful piece of poetry. Really beautiful, Trish. So relatable too.
     
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    Jamie

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    SUPERB..thats all I got to say
     
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    Arhaz

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    it's beautiful, picturesque, a lot of visual senses, all in all bravo!
     
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    Trish

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    :blush: Thankyou all so much :blush:
    The person I wrote it for loved it and said "this is the most beautiful thing some-one has ever done for me...."
    I'm happy.
     
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    Ppr:Kut

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    I can really relate to that.... awesome :)
     
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    Debus

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    Wow, that's great Trish ^_^
     
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    Trish

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    Thankyou both so much!
    ^_^
     
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    Omar A

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    ####### awesome :eek:

    Good job Trish
     
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    Jamie

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    Some talented people on here I believe
     
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    Trish

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    Thanks.
    There are ALOT of talented people one here!
    Including you. :chemist:
     

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