Part II to Dreaming lovers as lovers dreaming. Fallen Again. When you said you loved me Baby, it was better than the greatest dream But now I know again, how it feels to be lied to And it's such a familiar sting These things that I thought were real are now vanishing And it just proves I'm an angel with broken wings The glass shattered in the darkness And I've stepped on every piece And every comfort is now the blood I bleed I try to hide it that I love you, baby And I hate it when you say my name What it makes me feel, I can't deny it I'm still just a fallen angel with broken wings Try not to be too angry but all I see are tears And I can't stop from drowning in their stream And if you were ever honest, honest You'd never know how much it'd mean I'm sorry I can't help but to want you Like a bird can't help to sing Maybe I was too open Maybe it's not meant to be Maybe what we were waiting for Was a killer bee And though you were all I was waiting for I was just meant to feel your sting Cause I'm a fallen angel with broken wings.
It has good flow. It might be kinda useful to use periods in place of the next line. It's sometimes confusing "Try not to be too angry but all I see are tears And I can't stop from drowning in their stream And if you were ever honest, honest You'd never know how much it'd mean I'm sorry I can't help but to want you Like a bird can't help to sing " That was a beautiful verse, i must say. I really liked that. "The glass shattered in the darkness And I've stepped on every piece And every comfort is now the blood I bleed" I also liked this. It just tells of discomfort from what used to be comforting. Love is fragile, and so is glass. Once either is shattered, the pain of each is one that we all bleed. Ah, I really enjoyed the two parts of this. A good use of the angel and broken wings. The first of proof of reality, the second of inner-despair, the third of inferiority, used, and shame. A give/take part was here. "I try to hide it that I love you, baby The "it" looks and sounds out of place imo. But thats an opinion. so eyeah.. Bravo.