Dissolve

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    Will

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    Dissolve

    My conscience is where I hurt
    When every other part of me feels so good
    And now that I am alert
    I am achieving all that I ever could

    But now I’m laying here
    Watching this all dissolve
    I have this intense fear
    That everything is my fault

    I don’t understand my pain
    I’m not sure why I hold it deep inside me
    I just need to leave the rain
    And just hold you close to me, right beside me

    But now I’m laying here
    Watching this all dissolve
    I have this intense fear
    That everything is my fault

    But now I’m laying here
    Watching this all dissolve
    I have this intense fear
    That everything is my fault

    I don’t understand what this world has to offer me
    And every single day just seems like a test to me
    I’m faced with these crazy challenges that I lose
    And no matter what I do I can’t seem to choose
    Which path I should take that will lead me right to you
    So that I can spend my life by your side with you

    But now I’m laying here
    Watching this all dissolve
    I have this intense fear
    That everything is my fault

    My conscience is where I hurt
    I’m not sure why I hold pain deep inside me
    And now that I am alert
    I just want to keep you close, right beside me

    I don’t understand my pain
    When every other part of me feels so good
    I just need to leave the rain
    ‘Cause I’m achieving all that I ever could

    But now I’m laying here
    Watching this all dissolve
    I have this intense fear
    That I will lay right here
    To watch it all dissolve
    With this, my burning fear
    That everything is my fault
    That everything is my fault
    Everything is my fault
    It’s all my fault
    Forgive me
     
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    _PianoPaPercut_

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    I haven't been in the 'writers cove' section in ages..!! But anywho, I liked your structure to it, it's clean and has a point.. I especially liked the last verse.. ^^
     
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    Derek

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    Will strikes again! Great job :).
     
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    Omar A

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    Good Job Will. I like it alot :)
     
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    Will

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    Thanks for the comments.
     

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