Disertion of Reality

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    HARLEYsheXda

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    Desertion of Reality by HARLEYsheXda

    Captivated by the world
    Vanished with the fantasy
    Drifted in the dream
    Tangled to obstinacy
    Trepidation is the feelings
    Of doubts towards the verity
    Your refusal to believe is a desertion of reality

    Faith is your kind you hardly refine
    Trussed to promises, your nature of love
    Hit by the trust you barely find
    Whenever you fail to preserve
    (Negativity becomes the strength you oversee
    Bind to anxiety, you'll act unpleasantly)

    Forever...
    Distressing eternally
    Whispering in frustation
    In dismay, incessantly
    Your words of pleasure
    So much pain you seized
    You'd choose to despair rather than to heal...

    It seems to me you decline to understand
    Caught in disbelief, nurturing miseries
    How can i make you to comprehend?
    From capturing in shadows that lies beneath

    A friend, an enemy to the reflection you see
    Exist in the mirror of imaginings
    You trust your illusion
    You hate your scream
    Logic; to me - to you is dream

    Thrust into seclusion
    Not where you mean to stay
    The world isn't yours
    Not where you want to live in
    You're better left alone
    Dwelling in your dream
    Those fear that's hiding from you
    Should soon be revealed

    Fear is yet to be repaid
    You cannot foretell your fate
    What are you running from?
    Why do so much hate?
    Straightening your mind
    You wish not to grief again
    Don't want to be left behind
    Just name your pain...


    This come out from the free-writing of the other poem i made... maybe with a lot of grammatical error and misapprehension, i guess... i dont understand it myself!!! it's been a while since i'm not writing this kind of stuff, that's why it sounds crappy a bit! I could not put it into songwords - it's more like a poem... any opinion, sugesstion, criticism, sarcasm etc are welcomed... kindly requested... :) if u want to share urs please do so...

    thank you :)
     
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    ass_kicker

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    wow. ^_^
     
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    HARLEYsheXda

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    thanks... :)

    (i dont quite understand it myself! it's somekind of motivation song i wrote 'bout this up-and-down feeling i have inside... that's why i cannot put the words into sense... duh...)
     

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